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My favourite character from "Death Note".

This time, may I please ask for hints on composition and balance of the image?

L (c) his owners
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humanofprey Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work on his face, especially on his hair :thumbsup:
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LexGoyle Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Student Digital Artist
We love L ^_^ Excellent work.
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rocky-chan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2008
cool =)
mir gefällt gut wie du Schattirung mit Muster bearbeitet hast... sag mal hast du das in Photoshop gemacht? Also die Outis mit grafiktablett?
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx! Ja, skizze und dann inking mit tablett. Aber das inking selbst hab ich nochmal mit illustrator getraced.
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rocky-chan Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
Ö_Ö aaahh k... *verdammt hab kein illu*
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
das kann auch nur illustrator cs3.
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rocky-chan Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2008
schade -_- die wege dahin bleiben mir dann wohl verwehrt
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LexX-Ferrovocho Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
Excellent work, L in your own style.

Death Note for me is one of the best anime series that I've ever seen...
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
I think so, too.
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Silvolf Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
I like the composition and proportions, so I'm not that helpful with crits. Nice pic though, L is cool!
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He sure is =)
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ghostlymarionette Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
great work.
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BrooklynBH Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well, it DO looks balanced, but it's balanced to the left, if there were somethig in the white space, and it's important, and any person doesn't look it in a range of 10 seconds, then it's unbalanced, also if he/she "doesn't want to look at it" because of the colors, but, at least, it seems it works

a tip, is that, like the camera, if you divide the paper with 4 lines (2 verticals, 2 horizontals, it looks like this shape #) the places it crosses, are important points, I don't remember how it's called, but I know that thos are the points that the eye looks first in a picture
hope it works that info
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much for the hint! Maybe I can use it for future pics! =)
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BrooklynBH Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
now that I think, I wonder if it works in "widescreen" mode X_X, because it's getting famouse that format x,x
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Epantiras Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see you've become a Death Note fan like me :D
uhm, composition... composition... the only thing I can say is that there's too much white space on the right, maybe you can fill it by rotating vertically the Death Note title and enlarging it a little, it should be enogh to balance the grey L
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the hint! Actually I tried to compensate that white space on the right with the position of the pic in the outer frame. There is more white space on the left. Guess it didn't work the way i hoped, though.
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Avathae-Mangaka Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
I wish I could assist you*feels useless (once more as my parents say)*but this is great work.
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Neomae Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much =)
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Avathae-Mangaka Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
your welcome
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